Wednesday, October 23, 2013

The Great Safari



Once upon a time, there was a brave rhino named Ed, who lived on a safari with lots of other animals. Ed was walking and minding his own business, when he met a meerkat named Figgest. Figgest was eating grass. Figgest said, "Watch out! There's an alligator named Max. He's in a little creek."

Max was in the little stream, waiting for Leaper the antelope to walk by. As how he planned, Leaper came trotting by. As soon as Max was ready to take a big bite, he opened up his moth. Max crawled over a little bit and started to chomp, but Leaper was too fast for Max to take a good, giant bite.

Max got very mad that he missed Leaper. he started to follow Leaper, then Leaper ran really fast and hi in his home. Ed walked by to Max and said, "Do you want to eat Leaper?" "Yes!" said Max. Ed was about to take a big swing with his horns. Max hid under the water. Ed's horns whipped so fast he fell down. Then, Ed got back up. Ed went to Snore, the lion, and said, "Can you go get that stupid mongey poach, Max?" Snore got up and walked over to Max's stream. The lion roared and Max knew that he was going to get him. This time he dug the river deeper, so he could hide better when Snore and Ed came back to get him.

Meanwhile, Splash, the elephant, was in his pool of water with Thunderfoot the hippo. They were playing. Splash was getting his trunk full of water to spray Thunderfoot. Thunderfoot splashed the water to splash Splash.

Figgest and Leaper were tumbling by Slash and Thunderfoot's pool. Thunderfoot said, "What are you doing near our pool?" So, Leaper ran away with Figgest on his back before Thunderfoot could even finish what he was saying.

Then, Ed came over to Max's stream and saw that Max had dug deeper in his stream. So, Ed got his horns and stretched his body out wide. He got Max out and dropped  him. Then he got his horns and whipped him. Max couldn't get up because Ed was standing on him. Ed quickly called Snore to eat him. Snore ate Max. And, all the animals on the safari were safe.

THE END

No comments:

Post a Comment